Due to the music is pre-composed. Therefore the music didn't fit with what is shown on screen when the character is writing on the wall as the music is too dramatic for the scene. This is a point which has been mention quite a few times in the feedback, which is an area for us to make changes to.
The screen time of the making of the toy is too long. Which we might need to add another glitch effect to cut down the duration.
The drone shot, the "woah" effect is achieved. However, if it was limited to only for the ending the effect would have a bigger impact then showing drone shot twice in the clip. Also, the drawing of the friend isn't really clear in this scene which we will have to re-take this process. We decided to change from a drone shot to close up.
WHAT DID IT REMIND YOU OF:
Fantasy and Adventure Genre came up in the feedback. Which I can see parts of the convention that is linked to our film opening.
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